Letter to Bilbo

168 Clyde Road
Fendalton 8053
Christchurch
New Zealand

23.7.07

Dear Bilbo,

Hi, I am Bertie Taylor from Fendalton School and I was just wondering why did you go on the adventure when you could have just stayed in your hobbit hole with your feet in front of the fire? What did it feel like when you lost all your stuff down the river?

I just have some advice that next time you go on an adventure, if you ever do, you should go prepared and ready for anything, unlike you were when you first tried to go and see what the trolls were doing. I was just wondering if you went on this trip again what would you change. For example, you would take more food or take more clothes.

I really liked reading about you because you aren’t person you are a hobbit and it is quite interesting reading about other specious

Thank you for spending your time reading my letter.




Yours Sincerely,





Bertie

New computer has arrived

Hi Bertie - flash new computer has arrived at work. I'll bring it home tonight. No excuses not to do your home work now.

Cheers sweetie
Dad

Term 3 goals homework

My first school goal is to be more organised with my homework and get It in on time. I wil do this by getting a time say 7:00 to 7:30 and doing my homework then otherwise I will just put it of and not do it.
I will know I have achieved this when I don’t have to ask for extension and when my work is top notch.

I did'nt achieve this because I still have been leaving things to the last minute and saying ill do it and then I wont and right now I am evaluating my goals when my homework is due tomorrow and I have still got to make term 4 goals so that deffinitly shows that I didn't achieve this goal.

Term 3 goals reading

My second school goal is to read more and read a variaty of things like magazines and comic books.
I will achieve this by going to the library, getting more books out and spend about half an hour reading a day, and if I don’t I will catch up on the next day.
I will know I have achieved this when I can finish a book in a week and want to read more.

I think I sort of acheived this goal because I started off acheiving it and reading heaps but then I started getting lazy and started not reading that much

Term 3 personal Goals running

My first personal goal is to go on more runs regulary so I can improve and get a good place in the southisland champs.
I will achieve this by writing down a scedual with my brother and following it.
I will know I have achieved this when my dad has to pedel faster and I am realy puffed because I’m pushing myself.

I didn't acheive this goal because I didn't go on much runs but in the southisland champs I did really well and came 22 but I think I could of done better if I trained.

Term 3 personal Goals sport

My second personal goal is to practice my tennis and hockey for about ten minuets at leased 5 times a week.
I will achieve this by making a chart and ticking it off once I have done It.
I will know I have achieved this when I have better aim and a stronger hit.

I think I sort of achieved this because I didn't practice for 10 minuets but I went out every now and then and also I didn't make a chart but I deffintly now have improved heaps.

Term 2 Goals detailed stories

My first school goal is to write more detailed stories with better words all threw out term 2.
I will achieve this by not just rushing my writing and putting more effort into it.
I will know I have achieved this when I have good sentence starters and interesting sentences.

Evaluation

I think I acheived this goal because when I retold Hansel and gretel It was really long and detailed.

Term 2 Goals Homework

My second school goal is to do quality homework and hand it in on time throughout term 2.
I will achieve this by having a paticular time each day to do my homework.
I will know I have achieved this by looking back at my old homework and compare them and there will be a big difference.

I think I semi acheived this because I did realy qualitty work but I left it to the last minuet

Term 2 home Goals sport

My home goal is to get fitter and better at sport Throughout Term 2.
I will do this by going on runs when I’m supposed to, and going to sport practices.
I will know I have achieved this when I am doing really well in my sports and doing the best I can.

Evaluation

I think I acheived this because I went on runs I was supposed to go on and I concentrated at my sport practises.

Term-1 goals i.c.t

My first school goal is to get more familiar with i.c.t. and not have to get help all the time from other people.
I will achieve this by using the computer more and if somthing happens try to solve it myself and if I can't then I will get a tech wizard.
I will know I have acheived this when I can help people myself and don't need any tech wizards to help me.
I will acheive this goal throughout term 1.

Evaluation

My first school goal was to get more familure with i.c.t. and I think I semi acieved that because I still need a bit of help sometimes but other times I am fine by myself.

Feedback - blog

Your blog is looking superb! Can you please make sure you have evaluated your term one and two goals? That way you can measure your progress in learning.

You are such an awesome learner. Keep up the great work.

Term-1 goals concentrate

My second school goal would have to be to concentrate more in class and get more work done.
I will do this by trying not to talk and not being silly.
I will know I have acheived this when I get more work done and don't get told off all the time for talking.
I will acheive this goal throughout term 1.

Evaluation


My second school goal was to be more sensible in class and same as last time I think I semi aheived this goal because I once got told to go and sit somewhere else, but I am better than I used to be.

term-1 goals homework

My last school goal is to make my homework quality and not just rush it so I can have more time having fun.
I will achieve this by having a special time at home maybe for an hour a day and do my homework in that time.
I will know I have acheived this when I don't have to ask for an extension and I will compere my work with my previose work and see how much I have improved.
I will acheive this goal throughout term 1.

Evaluation

My third school goal was to be more organised with homework, and I tell you that was a disaster I Failed that one because I left everything to the last minuet and it was all rushed.

Feedback

Looking good Berts,

Your goals are coming along nicely. Thank you for the work you are putting into them. Next step is to put the Goal Evaluations in also so we know how well you met them.

Rob

Term-1 personal goals housework

One of my home goals is to help around the house more and not complain if I get asked to do something like wash the dishes or load the dish washer.
I will acheive this by doing jobs for pocket money or something like that.
I will know that I have acheived this when I don't complain and do the job when I'm asked.
I will acheive this goal throughout term 1.

Evaluation

My third home goal was to help more around the house and I achieved that because I have been doing heaps more than I used to.

Term-1 personal goals unicycling

One of my home goals is to get better at unicycling.
I will achieve this by practising in my free time and trying out new things on it.
I will know I have acheived this when I can ride all the way along wai-iti tce.
I will acheive this goal throughout term1.

Evaluation


My second home goal was to get better at unicycling and I deffintly got better at that because now I can almost bunny hop and now I can pick up a drink bottle off the ground while I’m riding.

Term-1 personal goals reading

One of my home goals is to get reading more.
I will achieve this by going to the library more often and using my spear time to read.
I will know I have acheived this when I have a whole load of books sitting in my bookcase that have been read.
I will acheive this goal throughout term 1.

Evaluaiton


My first Personal goal was to get reading more and as most of my other goals I semi achieved that because once I read like 6 chapters straight but at other times I had the opertunity to read but I didn’t.

My Limerick

There once was a man called Daniel
Who would refuse to drive a manuel
One day he tried
And almost died
When he hit and squashed a spaniel